Here I have sat for all this time,
Christmas and New Years have passed.
Lingering in anticipation for the joy
and sensually teasing bliss I bring
when consumed in lustful appetite.
Yet to my dismay, a newcomer arrives.
as exclamations of happiness sound,
for this shiny red heart shaped box.
He gets to touch those cherry sweet lips,
teasing with a small bite from her fingers.
While I age in lonesome depression,
wondering if I am going to ever please?
Author notes
Your prompt is:
the last piece of expensive chocolate in the box
theme: personification
A contest entry
- "The time has come," the Walrus said, "To talk of many things" by HeavenScent4U.
700 points, ended December 21, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That poor piece of chocolate, so delectable yet left with no one to share all it has to offer. You have no only put nice emotion into this but also that kick of sensuality, I like that
Thanks for this wonderful entry and good luck. Be well and be blessed
Wonderful entry!
rules 10
presentation 10
spelling, grammar, punctuation 19
originality 20
how well you handeled the prompt 20
overall 19
98 points
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Your prompt is:
the last piece of expensive chocolate in the box
You have until December 20th to complete your entry. Good luck to you. Be well and be blessed
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Yep, bid high
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