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tools of wisdom

Missing image

drawn from cracked hickory planks,

   my worthiness is no longer of any use ~

i have held your thoughts together,

   my threads of time have seen your plight ~

rusted, but not cracked, strong, yet withering,

   a template for your life i shall always be a part of ~

beside me, forged steel of strength lay waiting,

   bolts of iron muse hidden between the minds' junk ~

carpenter of knowledge sifts through our lair,

   searching for perfection, they grab the shiny moment ~

bending from the heaviness in your heart,

   each hardened nail thrown back into the drawer of regret ~

leaving a pile of worthless cross-threaded nuts,

   a poet of conviction, never leaves his tools of wisdom unused ~ 

Author notes

This is a mirror image of how a Poet/Writer can become useless,

 unless they use every tool in their minds' drawer of thought ~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This contest is invite only. If you do not find your name on the list below, please do not enter. Thank you.



Knight70
Angel w o Wings
poetic-theorem
Arkbear
jo-el
scion
micol
mcheadle
capricornpoet
InBetweenThoughts
kniepower
from1chalice
idle mind wondering
markgrif
Michael A
Im3
Min-Inister

Grey Mouser

 

 

Your prompt is:

the smallest screw in the bottom of the junk drawer

You have until December 20th to complete your entry.

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  • Tam
    January 5, 2008

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    splendid!

    the insight here is fabulous!
    very, very well done...you took the prompt and penned it into such a wisdom filled poem...
    I love how your mind works...
    you are a poet, indeed, sir! a very gifted poet with such a sweet gentle heart...
    you are like a bumble bee bear! LOL my Daddy calls bumble bees gentle giants...
    YOU ARE MY BUMBLE BEE TEDDY BEAR...
    Big Hug!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Mikerlantz
    January 3, 2008

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    Wow!

    I really like this one! ^__^ (I'd Give you more points but im Kinda new to this site so I dont have many, sorry)


  • Patpowers silver member
    December 23, 2007

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    Good job Arkbear!

    Same here,Congratluations on your honorable mention Arkbear! Good way with the words and thoughts in this! You are one of the best. Thanks again for sharing your talents this year and MERRY CHRISTMAS!


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    December 21, 2007

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    Congrats on your HM, although I would have liked to see this in the top three. I adore the depth of this poem ... "i have held your thoughts together,

    my threads of time have seen your plight ~

    rusted, but not cracked, strong, yet withering,

    a template for your life i shall always be a part of ~"

    Awe-struck is a great description of how I feel.

    Wondered, however, what the use of the tilde is for in your poetry style? Flair, pause, something else?

    -Steve


    • Arkbear gold member
      December 21, 2007
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      Hey Steve ~

      Thanks for the nice review, and the tilde is one of my trademarks

      I will hardly ever use a *period ~



      Thanks for stopping by,

      .....Happy Holidays to you and yours,

      Bear ~

      • Solo Wisp gold member
        December 21, 2007
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        Thanks for the heads up Bear!

        So what do you have against periods? Their resounding, thump-like end?...need something off the silent ground that waves a bit?

        ...And may your holidays be full of happiness, love, peace, and joy!

        -Steve


  • HeavenScent4U
    December 21, 2007

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    Wow, this is so powerful and full of mental imagery and emotion. You have tapped in well to not only your object but also the poetic mind. Very well done. Thanks for your entry and good luck. Be well and be blessed

    Excellent job!

    rules 10
    presentation 10
    originality 20
    spelling, grammar and punctuation 19
    how well you handled the prompt 20
    overall 19

    98 points


    • Arkbear gold member
      December 21, 2007

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      Thank you ~

      This was a nice challenge, thanks for the opportunity,

      Bear ~


  • Scion
    December 21, 2007

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    This is awesome. I like how you weave the theme of a poet's tools into the entirety of the poem. The first line: "drawn from cracked hickory planks" really grabbed me and held me until the end. I love the imagery and am very pleased to read this. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this with us.
    Cheers.

    • Arkbear gold member
      December 21, 2007
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      Thanks for the great review ~

      ....my oldest Son just bought the 2008 Scion xB.........I almost stole it from him , and gave him my new truck........really cool car!



      Bear ~

      • Scion
        December 31, 2007
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        I've never seen a Scion. I bet they're pretty sweet. my name just reflects my status as an offspring; wish it stood for a car, psha! tee hee. Thanks

  • HeavenScent4U
    December 14, 2007
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    Your prompt is:

    the smallest screw in the bottom of the junk drawer

    You have until December 20th to complete your entry. Good luck to you. Be well and be blessed


  • -theheartofme-
    December 12, 2007

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    lol I stopped by expecting to seem some sage wisedom, let me know when this one is ready to be read!

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