Mindless chatter
Lifeless days
Hopeless lovers
Pointless games
Useless teachings
Aimless words
Tastless fasions
Flightless birds
Yet I'm suppose to smile...
Author notes
Lets face it, the world isn't really a happy place. The media can say what they want.
A contest entry
- ANYTHING YOU WANT TO WRITE/16 entries /20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
550 points, ended December 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - True colours. by Delicate Fire Water.
450 points, ended December 27, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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*applauds*
Beautiful. So much emotion in so little words. I envy you. Not many people can get their point across in so many words. Bravo!
Good luck in my contest, all the best,
*Stephi*
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Strong and to the point...yes the world can be very harsh, we just do the best we can.
Best to you.
Thank you for entering! -
Ok this was a nice piece... accept my eyes my eyes...
was hard to focus on what was written...
Best of luck to you
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Thanks and ill be sure to change the background. i acttually debated for a while if i should and that answers it ^.^ thanks again
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