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Escape

I put the pen to the paper,
Now I escape,
My mind goes blank,
As I think.

I wont worry about my life,
I'll just wait to write,
What comes to mind,
As I unwind.

You think its funny,
My escape,
You can't laugh at me,
As I'm set free.

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  • Everwind Rising
    December 16, 2007
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    A great escape it is, and freedom opening before each poet's pen!


  • Rele anmwe
    December 14, 2007

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    Freedom is a choice and not a will. Sometimes we take a good look at our surrounding and find things to not be normal because we either want something and we do not get or have something we do not want.

    if you know the story of the hungry man

    He was so hungry he'd eat about anything.

    When he find the food, he ate so much

    then his belly was full,

    now he no longer hungry but he still feels not all right.

    That's life, things are perfect the way they are.

    But we seem to always think that they are not.


  • Dienush
    December 13, 2007

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    Welcome to AP

    This is a definition of poetry many will agree with. Your emotion is obvious in it. Keep writing, and hope you enjoy the site as much as we do

    ~Diana


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    December 13, 2007
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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    Well said! Writing is a way to break free and fly. Great write. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. AP is pleased to have you here and we all hope that you enjoy the site. If you have any questions, just ask! The Greeter team is here to assist you.

    JeannieD