yaad karta hun toh har baat yaad aati hai
pinghalti shamma fir roshan ho jaati hai
murjhaye chehre ki hansi laut aati hai
tumhari jhanjer ki awwaz chhanak jaati hai
lagta hai jaisi kal ki baat hai
saari saari raat subah ki intzaar
har subah tumse milne ko bekrar
mera baar baar tere darwaze ke paas se guzarna
nigahen milte hi woh mera tera sharmaana
tumhari gairandazi ki wazah poochhna
phir tumse milne ka bahana karna
yaad karta hun to har baat yaad aati hai
guzri zindigi bachpan men palat jaati hai...
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nice
Nice one yaar.....waise i had never been in love...so cant really relate myself with these thoughts...but my little poetic mind says that tis work is fantastic
my fav lines
murjhaye chehre ki hansi laut aati hai
tumhari jhanjer ki awwaz chhanak jaati hai
wallah....even i used to dance with pag main ghungru...your poem reminded me of that!lol
keep up the good write dear
Love
Anshu
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yaad karta hun toh har baat yaad aati hai
WAH! WAH!! WAH!!! Kiya khoob kahaa hai aapne janaab, mazaa aa giya. Aap ki yeh nazam mujhey bohut hi passand aaee. Piyar mein janaab aksar aisaa hi hota hai, insaan kabhi hasta hai to kabhi rota hai. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed this nazam. thank you for sharing.
All the best - Sukhdarshan -
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thanks Sukhdarshan for enjoying and commenting on this poem. Thanks again Bhai Saheb.
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