"Dog come here!"
I hear them shout,
And then through the woods they scout.
Looking, looking,
here and there,
But they cannot find him, no, nowhere!
"Dog come HERE!"
They angrily call,
And decide to throw him the well worn ball.
Then to the place where they dropped it the run,
Under the boiling, Blazing sun.
And in the end they find him there,
Smug and happy,
Looking worse for wear!
Author notes
Ok guys, I am 10 so it is very bad I admit!!
A contest entry
- HAPPY CONTEST. My first contest only 1 rule! must rhyme. by K1r5ty.
900 points, ended December 29, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks kirsty
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Think this is brillient and thank you for entering my contest! the rhyming flow was very good...... and the poem about the dog well it sort of reminded me of a memory i have!! thank you again x
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Thank You, I don't think i will win but who cares if i don't?
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YEY
1111 applauses 2 U !!!!!!!!!! -
Rock on
Yo Han th was so cool!!!!
I bet you were thinking of Merlin when you wrote it! Right???? -
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yeah
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