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Be Free

Ripple away from me,
so far away from everything.
Let go from my body,
a ripple away from me.
Be free.

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    Very nice take on the prompt. Strong and beautiful, with wonderful flow.
    Well done.
    Thank you for entering!