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Ariel

Half awake
She listens for the tooth fairy
She's asked
"Where was she last night?"
Then there was a creeping
Into her room
A pound beside a mermaid purse
And a note
(In a hand like mummy's)
"Do you know Ariel?"

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  • dormaness
    December 12, 2007
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    cool

    lol awsome. I like the way you wrote this one, it made me laugh for some reason. lol