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shredded
life’s meaning
...by indifference
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In a list
A contest entry
- torn paper- 5 hours by Cat.
500 points, ended December 12, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is a great message- and so topical for the this point in history-
apathy, lazy acceptance of status quo is never the answer
great brevity- nicely done
m -
now that's effective word economizing... wow.
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wow, this says a lot in so few words..it is a sad thought too..the indifference.
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...another hard hitting piece in this contest. Not much positive one can say about torn paper is there ? Great piece
Ruth
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indifference infuriates me.
no one has that right, no one.
apathy and indifference are such
a cop out. i like the message her.
good luck
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