I wrote
“ Love”
on parchment
scraped point
to add “You”
I tore a hole
we split
the poem
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The one, two punch was a Knock-out! Sad but humbling slice of life in less than 20 words! Amazing...
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i love the splitting of the poem-
and the inclusion of you- a great take on the prompt..
this contest gets harder and harder...
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Another great piece in this challenge! Mary certainly has her hands full with this one.
Terrific take on the contest and as always, your work is solid and full of subtext and imagery.
Well done.
e~
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I've just read a few of the contest entries and after having read yours too I don't know how Mary is going to judge this. Beautiful poetry - only you can split a poem into something like this!
~ Nicolette
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oh, this one is sooo damn clever~ love the end. Perfect!!!
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shared words.. very lovely
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Oh my...cat has her hands full with judging this one
Wonderful write here. I took a similar stand on the prompt
Ruth
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I like this one for the physical action of it. I can see you doing this. Very cool image.
Good luck.
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