enormous tenderness feel in our garden,
beautiful flowers opening, the birds singing,
pass so many hours of life dreaming,
feeling an inebriant perfume of jasmine.
all the time decorate your hairs with roses,
transforming queen between so many flowers,
got drunk with your love, many odours,
to make my life the happiest one.
seeing much you happy with my embraces,
certainly sleeping in lukewarm arms,
all passions leave alone in hot coals,
so soft perfection, in starry nights..
will bring in heart, the taste of wish,
beautiful hands, most gentle caresses,
in each word a corner of birds,
wakes all love in soul with a sweet kiss.
Author notes
Prompt: 1) Love - between friends/family/animal (absolutely anything)
A contest entry
- HAPPY CONTEST. My first contest only 1 rule! must rhyme. by K1r5ty.
900 points, ended December 29, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Some very powerful lines.....
"got drunk with your love, many odours"
"so soft perfection, in starry nights.."
Thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck!! Loved this piece
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