Kill me with your masquerade
of love, as you shatter my
and it becomes a lonely
sacrifice
As I scream from within, take
delight, as my black-circled
eyes release glass teardrops,
as they flow like blood, from
a cutter's wrist, I surrender
to you, my frost-bitten soul
The rainbow cities are to festive
and bright, a far cry from this
dark chamber, my Hell, that I call
a heart, the place where the lonely
dance, with themself, my dark realm
I am wondering how long, I can endure
this pain inside, as it suffocates me,
taking my life, drowning me, as if I
am going under, as the ocean's revenue
End this now, the misery, that is in
the joy and suffering of loving you,
the very one, that pulls me down, and
slowly, is sending me to my grave, my
deadly drug...
Author notes
I chose options #2. ~the color BLACK
#3. ~ I used all of the words in the list
A contest entry
- Make me feel dark and emotional. Lots of options!! by Kia Tenshi.
600 points, ended December 13, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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I love how you entwined all the words. Very creative!
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Oh my gosh this is just an amazing piece it is sad and dark full of pain and the emotion is dripping from it.Goodluck in the contest best wishes always
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