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Sing To Me

Sing to me o’ sweet soul.
Let me close my eyes.
Resonate your beauty through
my heart, I sigh.

Sing to me wondrous heart.
Engulfed I am by your energy.
Captured by the rhythm,
enraptured by the melody.

Sing to me my muse.
You opened my desire.
I no longer run away
from my passions’ fire.

Sing, sing my sweet.
Fell me with your smile.
I long to be your love,
O’ but for a while.

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  • celestial lie
    December 15, 2007
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    nice

    I love the way this is writen
    its very beautiful


  • sixtimesseven
    December 15, 2007

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    nicely done

    it's good to see some older language today.
    i enjoyed the imagery. beautiful words. keep
    on keepin' on.