Shining in our plastic green
Regiment three hundred fifteen
Rifles loaded, glint with sheen
Never blinking, always keen
We will defend the teddy-bear
The toy-box and Barbie's chair
Our feet rooted, we shan't despair
Our lives we lay without a care
Until we're stuffed in attic box
Wrapped in old red 'xmas stocks
Walled-in by yellow lego blocks
We fight though there tick no clocks
Author notes
Don't mean to bash soldiers or anything - just trying to be creative..
A contest entry
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400 points, ended December 12, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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This is a smile poem! I like it, the image is great and the flow is wonderful with wonderful rhyme.
Love,
Amera♥
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this isn't exactly "bashing", so i'll let it go.... very creative and imagitive, best of luck.
Thanks for entering,
Annie Shadows -
great!
Imaginative, creative, funny
Great Work!
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