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a cold dark kiss
in the dead of night
a black shadow
a black widow
in the morgue
upon the shadows she walks
my red angel
never again will she leave my side
for i have fallen without her
she's here to save me
from my only demise
myself will kill me
the days i've died
"never leave me again" i cry
as a rainbow tear falls from her eye
she's left me before, and may again
but she's here right now
my only friend

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this is my first poem that i've showed to anyone, let me know what you think

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  • look for tomorrow
    December 12, 2007
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    this is really good,

    thanks for entering the contest

    good luck