a cold dark kiss
in the dead of night
a black shadow
a black widow
in the morgue
upon the shadows she walks
my red angel
never again will she leave my side
for i have fallen without her
she's here to save me
from my only demise
myself will kill me
the days i've died
"never leave me again" i cry
as a rainbow tear falls from her eye
she's left me before, and may again
but she's here right now
my only friend
A contest entry
- Why dont you hate them? by look for tomorrow.
500 points, ended December 12, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Of Genius and Lunacy, Of Life and Love by The Sage.
1000 points, ended December 17, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is my first poem that i've showed to anyone, let me know what you think
Comments
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this is really good,
thanks for entering the contest
good luck

