From the shore, the Channel Islands mound
Indistinctly grey against grey skies;
Barely separate from waters that surround,
They rest like invert wombs. Sheer turrets rise
At Cathedral Point—but we cannot see
Such detail from our shore. It strains our eyes
Just to trace dark, arcing curves of scree
That mark sharp land from mapless ocean ways.
Cloud-shrouded, the islands keep their mystery
From those of us on shore. Their lead-grey bays
And coves hide secrets frightening and dark;
Beneath thick storm-whipped spray and dusky haze,
The islands terrify. Their outlines mark
Blind boundaries of our human, mortal vision.
Grey shapes, they stand stark symbols of the dark,
Of loss, of harsh unbearable collision—
Love with Faith. To live without the Love…
Unthinkable; to endure the indecision
Loss implies…impossible. Above
Deep mist-grey mounds, cloud cover billows, parts
For one sufficient moment. Like a dove
Of sheerest light, the sun breaks through with darts
That glance from rock to sea and back again.
A gleam…a fragment light…then gone…. But hearts
That wear the weight of grief and twisting pain
Reach up, entwined with that faint light—rebound
With faith and love to rest on Heaven’s plain:
Barely held by waters that surround,
Infinite blue beneath celestial skies,
Seen from our shores, the Channel Islands mound.
A contest entry
- *~Watching Paint Dry~* G-400, S-300, B-200, HM-2 people by Oktobere Sahnge.
900 points, ended December 15, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Indeed, introspection of the past, Grey and indeterminate, what is truth but disassociated half truths, remembered as we wished they had been...mostly.. but hope remains eternal, lighting our way towards those sunlit meadows of frolic...and love....just be careful where ya step.


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~Overall:
Good job. =]
Lysander
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