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(Haiku) Sad Girl

A crushed small girl
Sadness crushing her dark world
Nothing but curls

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4,7,4.Haiku!!!

when i said her curls at the end i meant...Her only thing she liked was her hair and her curls

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  • Autumn Ginger
    May 2

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    aren't haikus 5, 7, 5? oh well... it's a good write no matter what kind of poem it is; keep penning!


  • Everwind Rising
    September 12, 2008

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    I like it! Haiku is a very difficult form to write. I've never been able to write it well. I like this.


  • Slick99
    June 2, 2008

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    i didn't know what a haiku was at first...... but you told me... you done really good for a HAIKU poem... keep writing haikus.. slick99;


  • SincerelyMegan
    February 16, 2008

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    I love Haikus and I love this poem.
    For a girl only a few years younger than I,
    you are an amazing poet.