Silent perfection,
viewed from differing angles,
remains as beauty.
Lines gracing soft form,
lead to total surrender.
Heaven's expanses,
move toward the same places;
following the heart.
Blissful invigoration,
awaits souls who dream boldly.
Author notes
Prompt: "Perspectives"
A contest entry
- NO GREENS! - A Rounds Contest by Idle Mind Wondering.
1700 points, ended December 18, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a luminous verse, filled with hope and insight. Wonderful read to lift the spirit. Blue
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this is soft like watching a candle flicker. makes me want to dream
well done.
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What soft and tender allure this piece presents. I love this perspective and the simplicity in words and lines only enhances its elegance.
Very good take on the prompt. Unique and creative. A lovely entry for this contest. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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Great write
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Anything with love and total surrender in it is a winner in my book
This is beautifully written, nice feeling from it.
Good luck in the contest
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Wow! This poem was truly very beautiful and well-written. The imagery in this was amazing. You did a wonderful job with this. God bless you always and best wishes to you in the contest.
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Dancing like waves of sorrow
what a calming piece, very beautiful and captivating.
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