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Falling

These tears are falling,
falling because I’m sorry.
Sorry I don’t love you,
I don’t love you like I used to.

The world never saw,
never saw the side of you that I did.
I did everything I could,
but I couldn’t do it all.

I tried to hold you up,
hold you up to face the world.
But the world just stood against you,
and so you just chose to fall..

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  • tiger lily
    December 12, 2007

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    sorry

  • Pvt. R.L Dreams
    December 11, 2007

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    Great poem heather,I don't know how to respond without angering people..So i will say great poem,keep the writing