im on the edge of a cliff
holding for my life
but why do i if i let go i wouldn't feel anymore
sad but true or is it true
will i feel pain
you showed up
you look at me
i need your help
dont let me fall
i want to live along with my
to find the way to die with no pain
never assume i'll find the way
but you'll have been there
to save me from the first time
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This poem has very alive emotion. When I was reading I could feel your plea for help.You are one of my favorite writers on here!
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this was wonderfuly wriiten. i used to think the same way this poem is extremely sweet and sour i love the pleading of the speaker, it and realisitness and life to the poem.
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