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Sand

Sand whipped in swirls
Of cream delight
Blue shafts of light
Spill from the heavens
Angel's hands
Spread the blanket of
Night as the
Ocean's murmurs
Turn into
Dark whispers of
Sleep.

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http://waltzingcat.deviantart.com/art/Captiva-Florida-53311150

Here is the picture I wrote a poem about!!!
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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 12, 2008

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    G'Day Diamond Slipper

    Wonderfully penned for the picture, lucsious imagery created in so few words

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    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Fedrizzi
    December 27, 2007

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    "Imagery Galore!"

    as in your own words lol, this is a wondrous and beautiful poem, i love your words and ways of how you depicted the painting, gave me a great big smile (^.^) continue on oh talented one

    p.s. ty for comenting and enjoying many of me poems


  • Fedrizzi
    December 27, 2007
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    "Imagery Galore!"


  • Denierim
    December 15, 2007

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    Beautiful. I adore the imagery in this one and how you showed it to us all. It fits well with the picture and is so beautiful! I could read this many times in a row without getting bored of it. Thanks for sharing this with us; beautiful work!