We are all together-
Holding hands-
We smile-
We are feeling love-
Pulsing through us-
Together-
In the light of Christmas-
We love-
Each other.
Author notes
Option 2. This is a weird style I tried out... Hope you like it!
A contest entry
- ccc: Cool Christmas Contest!!!! Kids 15 and under!!!! by longlife.
4500 points, ended December 25, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Holiday Contest of Love & Hate by Ms Raneika.
1200 points, ended January 7, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique- I can take truthful comments...
Comments
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very nice and simple thanks for entering your piece into my contest much love, Raneika
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Nice syle. it is unique!!!!! I think its very creative. and you described the happiness Christmas!!! Grreat Job good luck
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