Your eyes that smile
that laugh
that sing
your eyes that melt
Is it possible to love someone you barely know?
This I wonder as I gaze into the vastness
The complexity
that hides behind a smile
behind a gaze
behind a word
behind a soul
Please tell me what you think
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i really like this poem i love the feelings you have put into this and i love how you ask that question and my answer is, it's possiable, anyways, keep up the wonderful writing ~Amy
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I like the overall idea of the poem and the short lines i think they give off an appropriate mood for the poem. I wonder if maybe in line 5 you meant someone instead of some because that would make more sense.
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