My broom in hand, I cleaned,
the mess of my dream
no longer seemed fearful.
The stupid threat [your want]
is gone, swept away,
with the dust [desire]
that was once within us.
You can hope
but never can you
rape a heart
that has been broken
-just
give
up-
Please tell me what you think
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Wow Sweets
Well Sweets this is just a beaut yof a poem but incredibley e-motional as well and I just really like the way the words just jump off the page and flow through out. anyways this is just a very well penned e-motionallu gripping poem and I like this. any ways nice job and kepe it up as always Sweets
Daddy
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Fantastic piece of poetry you have penned here my friend. I truly enjoyed this piece. I loved how you gave him he--..great work again.
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wow....that was awesome....i think i know who it's about and if it is good for you to tell him to backoff, if not i just sounded like an idiot (which is often...lol) otherwise i liked it! GREAT JOB!!!!!!
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