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Continuous Regret

It has been three and a half years
Since you took your life away
I still blame myself
Almost each and everyday

It hasn't been easy
Copeing with your death
And i will keep doing so
Until i have no more life left

I still see your face
Constantly in my dreams
It has been a year
Since i awoke with screams

In my dreams you look the same
As you did before you died
When i see you in my sleep
I awake and start to cry

I have many memories
Of stuff we use to do
I also have pictures still
Of me and you

All this stuff
Stays locked away
So my pain wont come back
And that is the way it will stay

I never got to say
What i wanted to
So now you will never know
My hearts full desired truth

It pains me to know
I will never see you again
If i do
I do not know when

Your memory
Will lie in my heart for all time
Even after
The day i die

There is no more to say
That was all that was left
This is the story of
My continuous regret

Author notes

This is based off of something that hurt my heart really bad. I am hoping that this pain will go away eventually. If you want to know the story please IM me

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  • RosalindRawr-rific
    January 11, 2008
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    i love this poem and hope your pain subsides


  • night sky mystery
    December 16, 2007
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    i really love this piece i think you have exspressed your feelings well,and the construction of the piece is good. well done i hope the pain will fade for you,in time it will,just rememer that your friend is watching over you and has become an angel.
    all the best

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 11, 2007

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    This is really sad sending you healing hugs for your heart best wishes and much love always


  • meesh
    December 11, 2007

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    awww this is such a good poem i dont see anything wrong with it it sounds so sad..i like it how your rymed the 2ed & 4th line 2gether like i do in all my poems

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