Your beauty,
rivaled only by your inner self,
is never more than a thought away,
an all-consuming obsession
encompassing my very being.
I am awed by your courage
as your battles are never-ending
in your journey through life,
but, as an Angel would,
you reach out to others
with a kindness that warms my heart.
~The wonder of you~
painted forevermore
on the canvas of my mind.
Author notes
Lionheart
options,options,options contest --option #1
option 3
option #3 paint
A contest entry
- Seeing the beauty. by Enigma Kyler.
700 points, ended January 4, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Why do you love? by wondering.willow.
407 points, ended February 6, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm Glad You're in My Life. by surface--tension.
400 points, ended February 6, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Exquisite. I cannot describe the old (and almost forgotten) emotions this brings up. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck!!
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You had some amazing imaganary in this one it. thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest!
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What a precious piece of poetry this is!
I'm sure whomever this was written for/about feels very honored, indeed!
Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of this contest!
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nice imagery
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love it
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Thanks for sharing. I have to just say this was beautiful. The opening lines were very refreshing. Thanks for entering.
Love,
Evemauy
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you brushed a gorgeous painting of words. nice write. thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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this is a wonderful write!
thanks for entering
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dont get me wrong i think its a lovely poem
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because the other comment was not from this contest
and i wanted real paint not anything metaphorical
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OK, I understand
It wasn't c lear to me. I used it as a poetic device (which is what poets do). Thanks for replying.
Richard
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This is truly lovely. Very simple yet saying so much. I really like it
~*Lady Serenity
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A beautiful poem, It still needs a little more work I feel, the first stanza lacks some flow, but the second stanza does make it better.
I really like the last part, it leaves you wanting more.
This is an interesting write, and you've done a fine job so far.
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What a wonderful poem!
Very good write!
Thank you for entering!
Keep up the fine work!
~ Trill
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I Thank you, Trill
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This is very sweet and well written. I can relate to it perfectly! Good job, good luck, and keep up the great writing!
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Annndddd another contest entry from the fabulous lionheart!
I think someone's taking advantage of my "multiple entries option"
"the canvas of my mind"
Lovely phrase. Thank you for entering
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Thanks
I just took advantage of your invite
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very beautiful piece
thanks for entering and good luck,
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beautiful piece, good luck in the contest
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This is so sweet. Great write ^.^ Good luck in the contest.
♥ Kathraina -
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THANKS
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I thank you
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awww this is beautiful...really pulls at my heart strings and makes me so glad I have a wonderful guy.
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Beautiful
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A great entry
thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care
message me for anything
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I am curious
Why would you tell me my poem is a "Great Entry" and then remove it from the contest? I don't understand.
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Thank you
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Nice
Short, sweet, and to the point. I like it. Has a nice flow. Nice work. Good luck. -
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Thanks
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Hi - thanks for entering my contest - I enjoyed this. Best of luck!
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Simple, and elegant
Thank you. This piece is very elegantly written. Very nice. Best of luck -
Then you wonder why we love you! This is a beautiful expressive piece. Anyone's heart would be captivated by it Author!
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Thank you suseann,
You make me blush with your praise
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