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Would you like fries with that?

You're sipping your cocoa
Letting the warm become you
Cold fingers slip up behind your shirt
Warmness follows the cold
Leaving you confused
Then your little brother steps out
From behind the couch
"Would you like fries with that cocoa?"
"Bryant- what the hell?"
"I wanna be just like you when I grow up!"
"You don't go putting fries in people's shirts!"
"But Johnny did to you last night..."
Johnny- your boyfriend- came over last night
You both felt like fries,
And you both felt like something else
"Don't tell mom anything about fries-
And I'll give you a dollar"I

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I thought I could make it funny, but I'm not sure I did... eh...

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  • speakno3vil
    December 12, 2007
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    ewwwwww reminds me of the time i heard me sister and her boyfriend. i still have nightmares. 'sob'.
    funny funny


  • SweetNessaLynn
    December 11, 2007

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    Yeah it is funny because it reminds me of my little brother and sister with me when I got my first boyfriend. Best of luck in my contest.