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Poetry is...

the creative genius
of a god like mind.
One that is intricate and
extremely complexed.
Expressing life through
the window glass of the eyes.
As it is perceived by the
photosynthesis of the
cerebal cortex.
Which transfers thoughts
and emotions audibly or by
way of some type of medium.
Whereby, the communication
of those personal experiences
are related to other beings.
Who process it through the
channels of their own understanding
and unique vision.
Thereby, resulting in a call
and response kind of transference
of diverse emotions.
Which stimulates the soul.

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  • Everwind Rising
    December 16, 2007
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    I like this especially - "unique vision". Indeed we all have a unique vision of what poetry is.


  • zochit2me gold member
    December 11, 2007
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    A heavy analytical thought process of something that is really quite simple indeed.
    Poetry is...
    The transfer of human emotion from one to another.

    This is actually quite good but says a lot of the same thing throughout the piece.
    I wish you luck in this contest.

    Becky


  • Kept As A Shadow
    December 11, 2007
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    I really didn't understand it, but I could tell it was amazing because of the flow of the thoughts, and the smooth transition. I really did like the part:

    Who process it through the
    channels of their own understanding
    and unique vision.

    The poem is unique in it's own wa


  • TwiztidMaggot
    December 11, 2007

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    Poetry is the world! That's what it is... lol. nice work. keep it up! best of luck in the contest!!!

    Crimson