The forever changing colours in
my hazel eyes,
Are frozen now
as ice drop
tears they cry,
My glass heart
shatters,
then falls
onto the floor,
Spilling diamond memories
by loves closed door,
The birds song
is stilled,
now loves prescence has gone,
But, in dreams
I see you,
and so
I dream on,
Happiness,
I can feel no longer,
And, my sadness
just grows stronger,
Extinguished
is loves
fiery spark,
And I am left,
cold and lonely
in the dark
A contest entry
- Things we lost in the fire... by Jai Guru Deva.
500 points, ended January 26, 2008, 85 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - From The Heart by CanadianGirl1.
650 points, ended March 24, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh, an exquisite poem!
Happiness is love and sadness is love that is gone. But gladness is reading your lovely poem, most truly!
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Wow!!
This is one Powerful piece that swells the eyes and brings forth images to tug at the Heartstrings
Oh my!!
I can feel no longer,
And, my sadness
just grows stronger,
Extinguished
is loves
fiery spark,
Keep that quill dancing~~
I Appreciate Your comment on my work...
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wow.. this truly is very beautiful! thank you so much for your entry.
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wow....youo know what? You're on of the few poets here whose work I can read every minute! you never seem to bore the reader! this poem is so saad..makes me wanna cry! i love the diamond memeories line...!
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This was absolutely beautiful. Thanks so much for the gorgeous entry.
Good job and good luck. All my love, DxD. -
Wow...this poem is simply stunning. The imagery is fantastic and the emotion just pours out. Keep up the excellent work. Best of luck.
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I love the wording in this! Great with the images. Like a lot of your lines, so won't repeat them. I like the emotion and depth to this.
Beautiful.
Good luck in your contest.
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