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Useless

I can only watch you suffer,
Not knowing what help I can offer.
I am unable to look away,
But I don't know what to do or say.
I hate seeing the hell you're going through,
Not knowing how to help you.
Sometimes you don't know what's going on,
And it leaves me crying for so long.
I have to watch you slowly die,
Living with the guilt that I can only cry.
I see you reaching out for help,
But I don't know how to get you out of this hell.
I can't believe you might be gone tomorrow,
And all I can do is feel this sorrow.
I wish I could make you smile,
Even if it was only for a little while.
I wish I could take away all your pain,
Just to make you happy again.
You always seem so cold and distant,
I wish I could bring you closer in an instant.
I know this isn't your fault,
I just wish I could bring your pain to a halt.
Not knowing what to do or say,
Just makes me feel more useless each day.

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  • TheAshtrayGirl
    January 28, 2008

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    :)

    This is a very moving poem
    Very eye opening and sad
    Great poem

    Thankyou for entering my contest
    &
    Goodluck to you

    Jaz <3


  • Midoshi
    December 12, 2007
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    i'm soory about your mom. i feel this way everyday about my master. nicely said by the way. -_-'


  • pixxiepoetess
    December 12, 2007

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    I think you've done a great job capturing the helplessness so many of us have felt when our loved ones were suffering from something we couldn't cure for them. It's a terrible feeling but you've expressed it well. >pixxie<


  • daffodilblossom
    December 11, 2007

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    you did help

    you were the daughter who helped the most the others had blood of hers in their veins yet you showed so much emotion and were very luving to her