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Poem for Trish

I sit here,
Overwhelmed and overpowered by the river of ecstasy coursing through me.
Granting me life in it‘s flow, it springs from you.

My memory is a steel fortress with the utmost of luxury inside if you’ll let it be;
Full of every instant of you and I,
In there each one is safely confined for eternity.
They are more precious than the rarest jewels,
Shining bright in me.

A divinity.
Your skin like silk pearls.
Your lips pink as the setting sun and as soft as petals of a spring rose.
Your eyes hypnotizing me in their dark, bistred glow,
Making my heart ache with the what they incite
Through the billion images of our future in them.
Your hair long, with the angelically soft waves of the calm oceans.
Intervention of God himself could not be so,
You are beauty beyond beauty.

But love is not misplaced in aesthetics;
My adoration of you is not directed from my eyes,
But your soul.
It renders everything I know and desire into nothingness;
Effortlessly inspiring to the design of heaven,
Gently astonishing me at every turn,
And towering in a wealth of all that is simply good.
And your heart;-
Words will come and words will go with language through time,
But words alone could never define it.
For these things I worship you.

To lie with you is to lie in heaven.
Feeling your skin on mine is to touch the zenith of the spiritual.
Your kiss you is an ecstasy my heart can barely withstand;
Yet I am a slave to the addiction it holds me in.
When you hold me in your arms you hold me in the skies, soaring;
Yet at home, safe from all in the world.
Though nature may dictate that perfection is a lie,
To gaze into your eyes is to gaze into the eyes of the closest it‘s certain to have come.

We have so much youth and life in our bones,
It is our blessing, but our grandest misfortune also;-
It grieves me that forever is too far for us to see,
When life's wisdom is the prize of age.
Yet I wonder sometimes if it matters.
So if you allowed me the privilege to serve you,
With my dignity always and entirely detached from your whim;
I promise I would do so forever.
Striving to create for you the same utopia I feel at every moment we're together.
Forever young and unwise in the life our truest love bestows.

Though I am too often reminded that you’re not here,
And I despair in the hellish torture of it,
I know that should I become condemned to the be amongst the damned tonight or ever,
My last wish would always be for our bodies to be entwined for a final time.
Just on the sofa bed holding you tight to my chest in the night again.
And I’d wish this if ever only to say these words;-
‘'I love you more than I could ever say' never really does cut it.’

Author notes

Dedicated to Trish, I love you more than this or anything could ever say. You make me happier than I've ever though I could be. I only ever want to do the same for you and hope this goes to some way to that in some amount. Hope you like it! =D
xxx



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  • ms-cuddles
    October 20, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is just so full of emotions and thoughtfulness. You actually brought a tear to my eye. For a moment I just wished I was Trish. I don't know what else to say. Thank you for entering this and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles


  • TwilaTarragon
    June 1, 2008

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    Oh wow. Nice job. I love the emotion you put in this. It's almost as if I've met her, just by the way you wrote aput her. I hope she realizes how much she manes to you and how lucky she is to have someone who cares so much. Great write!! Good luck!!

    -Twila


  • takemypainaway
    March 11, 2008

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    this is truly cute

    i hope she relizes that she means this much to you

    this is somthing very special...

    great write

    thank you for entering!!

    **kat


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 3, 2008

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    This is beautifully descriptive and I did fine myself falling it to it quite naturally. I love this line "But love is not misplaced in aesthetics" it speaks volumes on its own and that is a great thing. Great piece.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 30, 2008

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    This one is gorgeous. I'm sure that she thinks so too. It's wonderful that someone has dedicated a poem to someone, it really shows true love. Beautifully penned, very heart felt, I can tell you mean it.


  • forever and ever
    January 2, 2008

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    Great write hun. keep up the great writing, good luck in my contest, and i want to also wish you a very happy new year!!


  • GypsyEyes
    December 12, 2007

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    Judge Says

    This is a beautiful poem! You have packed in to it tons of emotion and depth. Great poem! thank you for entering and good luck with my contest!!
    ~Dommi


  • Lady Nightshade
    December 11, 2007

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    I Love You So Much

    This is overwhelming.I dont think ive ever read something so beautiful.All those times we've had together seen through our eyes.Thank you so much for writing this.
    I love you so much

    p.s.this is fucking amazing btw,told you that you were a good writer.

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