Walking through a field of love, you softly grab my hand.
As we sit together on a bed of dandelions, you sweetly tell me how you'll always be my man.
As we sit together and watch the sunset, you lean over and gently kiss my cheek;
for now the moon is up, and the sun has set.
In our picnic in the moonlight, we drink champagne and eat strawberries,
and hold each other tight.
As we lay on the grass together, we reminisce on all our memories in the past.
We think of the great times we'll have in the future, and how we'll be with each other forever.
As we both turn toward one another, we lean into a kiss.
The moment feels right, and we're both in total bliss.
While we fall into a daze, the stars shine above us twinkling in the darkness.
God looks at his fine work and watches in amaze
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
2200 points, ended December 19, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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GREATT
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......this was an amazing write!!! THIS DESERVES TO WIN THE CONTEST!!!!!!!!. -
This is wonderful! Excellent imagery and you have made it personal enough to make me feel like I was there...and it makes me feel good, so you got that going for you. Well Done and Good Luck!
Wyatt
xxx
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