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One more chapter 'til this love is old.
Another shock to let enfold.

A whisper here a giggle there.
Just take my heart and watch it tear.

You may not know,
and I may not show.

But this sherade is done,
and you have won.


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It's about a boy.

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  • stargazer91
    April 10, 2008
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    Wow. That's all that I've really got to say...


  • catherinevania
    December 11, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! asa tear runs down my cheek!
    "just take my heart and watch it tear"
    lets carve his heart out and cut it up with an insense stick and make blood insense....
    what a heartfelt poem.

    Blessed be...