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The Dark Side of Light

As the clouds passed between
the bright sun and my eyes
they became black to me
and white to the light
before they were gray
it was night.

A contest entry

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  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008

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    I am not even going to bother in killing my eye sockets in trying to read this black fonted write being overpowered by the backdrop border


  • Blooming Poet
    March 5, 2008

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    beautful descriptions here, you really know how to use yourr muse to your advantage. thank you for entering such a short and talented poem. i love it in everyway.