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Sweet dreams my love

I lay by your side with eyes wide enough to capture your thoughts,
I watch you get kidnapped by sleep as your vision is caught.

I cling to your side as heartbeats race under skin,
I drop a kiss in your dreams for you feel it when they begin.

I cover you up with wishes, and wrap hugs of cotton around your scent,
I melt my body into yours until existence is dripping content.

I inhale your love as you exhale your needs through tired air,
I cascade whispers over your lips and lock our palms before my prayer,

“Please God, 

 let us be safe, happy, healthy, and together forever,
let us be faithful and true in all that we do. Bless our lives together and bless us with a family one day,

give our love the strength to overcome all and win in the end.
                                                                                                      .....Amen”

I engrave kisses in your skin for you to always keep
Then I close my eyes and wait to reunite in our sleep

Sweet dreams baby………………


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Babe, I love sleeping by your side and watching you escape into your dreams, I love when you hold me in your arms as we fall into the night. I know my prayers will come true too, I love you!

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Comments

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    What a sweet, heartfelt piece this is, ah, isn’t love grand!


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    December 18, 2007
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    beautifully written! I cannot put into words how wonderfully written this is. simply amazing!


  • BurmaShave
    December 14, 2007

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    Takes me right back to singing The Ants Go Marching and falling asleep with my little guys. I had to swallow a lump--wonderful!!!


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    December 13, 2007

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    a very beautiful write filled with terrific lines that all meld into one great write. My favorite would be the ending...engraving kisses..great line. Very well done.
    Rory


    • Layne..
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you much, very happy you enjoyed, thank you for reading my work, I will be sure to return the favor

  • Josh0517
    December 12, 2007

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    AWESOME!!!! I love it, I love the little prayer right in the middle, that was awesome. By far the last three lines are the best. Great Job Baby!!
    -I Love you

  • Ruby34
    December 11, 2007

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    What a wonderful piece my friend, I love your words..this sound so peaceful and very passionate..great job..BRAVO!
    Amarige


    • Layne..
      December 12, 2007
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      Thank you for reading this piece, I am glad you enjoyed it
      -Layne

  • Swangrnv
    December 11, 2007
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    WOW!

    Stand up and take a bow! that was PERFECT!


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    December 11, 2007

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    *sighs*

    What a beautifully blissful, sweet and loving write you have penned flawlessly

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

    • Layne..
      December 11, 2007
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      Oh, thank you for your kind words, I am so appreciative, thank you for reading my work, I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.
      -Layne

  • moluv10
    December 11, 2007

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    Such a loving, heartfelt piece you have written here. I love the way you've expressed your emotions in this wonderfully penned write. you continue to impress me with your work. Great job!


    • Layne..
      December 11, 2007
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      Thank you Mo for being so faithful to all of my work, it means a lot....
      -Layne
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