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Rude

Rude
That's what; you're rude,
Rude as a pig
You don't care; you're rude
You like being rude
Most people hate being rude
Devastated that were rude
but you love being rude
rude is fun for you.
A hobby for you - to be rude.
Rude.
Rude is wrong,
rude is bad
rude makes people feel bad.
Rude makes people upset
rude is rude
you like being rude
revoltingly rude.
Until someone is rude to you.

Author notes

Okay, this is absolutely terrible I know but I plan on working it into something more poetic in time but I like to put things in here just for fun. Let me know what you think, I always like to get ideas from other poets.

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  • luvdrkchocolate
    December 16, 2007
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    Oh. This is quite some poem that you have here. It sounds like someone said or did something that really upset you. lol I think it's a great start for a poem. It has a lot of feeling to it and that's important. Now you might want to let us know a little about what happened so your reader can understand too? I don't know. Just a suggest.