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Echos

Realization.

A punch to the gut.

A heart beat skipped.

The people in that picture,

Seem like someone else.

Like friends I might've known years ago.

And the section of life they shared together,

No matter how short,

Doesn't seem like mine.

I see the girl that WAS me.

Smiling and happy with his arm around me.

I sit here and think.

'That can't possibly be me.'

There's such a carefree joy and happiness in their faces.

You can tell from just looking,

That they're best friends.

That there's a love beneath those eyes,

Far exceeding their age.

But that can't possibly be me....

That was another world.

Another time.

Another couple.

And the sad reality of it is,

It's the truth.

Our souls may be in that picture,

But it's no longer us.

There's no longer that carefree joy.

No longer that uninhibited happiness.

Those people are gone.

And in all truth and pain,

Have died.

 

 

 

But in their place,

Two new people were born.

Two totally and completely different people.

There may no longer be,

The unconfined joy.

Or the clearly visible happiness.

But that love.

That love that was living just beneath the surface.

It's a full grown flame.

All consuming.

An unconditional, unbeatable love.

Maybe those two people in the picture have died.

But from the ashes of what was lost,

Comes something tenfold of what was before.

The picture,

Is just a far away memory.

Of a life that once was.

Of a friendship that once was.

But as it should,

Love exceeded death.

Overcame time.

Surpassed distance.

And looked failure in the eyes,

And Laughed.

Nothing can overcome love.

Not death.

Nor failure.

Not hate or distance.

Love, unconditional,

Will outlast even time.

 

 

 

Should I never see his face again,

Or touch his skin,

Hear his voice.

It won't matter.

The love in his heart and soul,

Is forever.

Nothing on Earth, Heaven or hell,

Could change it.

It is forever....

And then some.

 

 

 

"There's an Angel with her hand on my head. She says I got nothing to fear. There's a darkness, living deep in my soul. Still got a purpose to serve. So let your light shine...God don't let me lose my nerve."  *~* Everlast 'Keep your lights on'

 

Author notes

Brandon...this is one you need to read carefully...I want to see if you get the underlying message. And leave a comment on it damn you!! **laughs** As for everyone else I love dearly...this one is deep...let's see how many of you get the 'between the lines' message...Love you all...and Brandon...this one is just for you!!!!

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  • BluArtistEyes
    December 24, 2007

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    Just Brilliant

    First off sorry I didn't get around to reviewing this sooner, like when I first read. I wanted to give it more time than I had at that time, because it deserves more time.

    The first stanza wow, I love the way you paint that perfect picture of what it feels like to be in love and that pain of realizing that you are no longer that same person, I've felt that & can relate there.

    The rest is just as brilliant.


  • irishxrose
    December 12, 2007

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    Wow sweetie... I am in awe. You are one of the most talented poets I've ever seen. Liz, this one really is amazing. The emotions and imagery are beautiful, and this is by far one of your deepest poems. Like I said, I am in awe... keep it up sweetie, and keep amazing me! LOVE YOU!


    • irishmidnight
      December 12, 2007
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      Drika

      Thanks hun!! And It is...it was one of those..."shit I gotta get a pen right now"...moments...LOL!! It came out of no where...but it seems to work.


  • Sweeney
    December 12, 2007

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    Amazment.

    Baby I cannot tell you how much these one poem means to me. I cannot tell you how much this one poem has changed so many things in an instant so many things that lay before me looming in the distance that were probably some of the most intimidating hurdles that I will ever face. I cannot thank you enough baby I simply cant. The irony of it all is that is what we were both talking about.

    I know lover that we have both changed greatly since or last embrace. That I have grown from the child I was to the man I am today. I understand that you have grown from the girl of my dreams into the beautiful woman that I could never have dreamed of. You are so much more than I could ever ask for. I love you so much and you are so wonderful and special and good to me.

    Baby I just want you to know that no matter what it is that lay between us whether it is distance or time or the changes that have taken place within us or our lives. The love that we have shared is bonding, the love that we share is so fierce much like our souls it will yield to nothing and no one. I will stand beside you, your hand in mine and whether I am far or near I will protect you and guide you and love you, always. Just as you have done for me all these years and just as you do for me now.

    Forever is our love, forever is our endurance and forever I am yours. I love you Elizabeth.

    • irishmidnight
      December 12, 2007
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      Brandon

      I love you baby...With all of my heart. I hate that I can't hear your voice right now. It's killing me inside. There's such a short time left before you're gone. And it's scares me. But i'm right here for you. I always will be. I love you so much!! It's insane!!! **hugs tight never letting go** Stay with me...even if it's not in body...I love you....forever Brandon...I swear it!!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 12, 2007
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    lucky brandon lovely write xx peter


    • irishmidnight
      December 12, 2007
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      Peter

      **grins** I sure hope he's lucky...**winks** thanks for the comment hun!!


  • JustWhoIAm
    December 11, 2007

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    WOW

    I love this, it is beautiful. Ok, I don't get the message :S

    Great write though

    GBA

    • irishmidnight
      December 12, 2007
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      Scott

      **hugs** thanks babe...and no worries...the message is a bit difficult to explain...But you know I love yas anyways...lol!!

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