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holidays near





ruby points bursting

somber green steal attention

Christmas in the air

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prompt: Christmas theme

A contest entry

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    December 16, 2007
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    Thank You For Entering

    Very well penned here, you have such a way with your words that make this a truly spectactular poem for the time of year and I liked how you allowed it to flow freely and not force it with your wording. any ways an all round good job and keep up the good work and good luck


  • nordicsky silver member
    December 13, 2007

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    Wow! Instant image in my imagination. Grey/green christmas trees lit with hundreds of small red lights.

    Thanks for posting this
    Kind regards
    Peter

  • Gott ist tot
    December 12, 2007

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    Good imagery here. I like how you used the colours. This was a good Christmas write.
    Thanks for your comment.


  • islekine gold member
    December 11, 2007
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    Lovely...

    Short, thoughtful...
    Thanks for entering!
    *PEACE ON EARTH*