i sit on the beach
a fire ablazed
the stars shining down
i sit here, now.
as i had, in happier days.
i think of her,
i want to cry.
this hurts so much,
i dont want to say goodbye!
im not ready.
"dont go!?!"
my heart screams,
"this just started,
baby please,dont leave.."
i look at the ocean.
the breaks in the waves,
endless,
agonizing,
beautiful,
uncontrolled,
its too late.
shes gone.
never to return,
im lost at sea.
tears fall shorelessly.
my gurl,
my baby,
gone.
my heart,desolated
never, to be mended.
my angels gone.
heaven,
transparent,
a long lost dream.
be critical. its the only way ill get better
Comments
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This is such a sad poem. I'm sorry that you feel like this, but there is no way for me to be critical because I'm in tears right now. Keep up the excellent work.
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