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Crimson Sorrow

I am here on the outside,
But inside I am already gone.
This dead that is spreading throughout my veins.
Kills my heart with every breath I take.
I am pouring out this crimson red,
to decorate my walls.
The drips of blood run down my walls,
I cry for no more pain.
I know that I am dead inside,
the feeling is everlasting.
Put away your hopes for me,
As I lay here and bleed.
My dreams are no more, I cover you in my sorrows.
I am not here on the inside.
Dead on the outside too.
I couldnt take the pain of losing everything.
So ending life was what I had to do.

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  • DarkLotus4Life.
    January 2, 2008
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    I really like this poem. Great Job.


  • colorxmyxworld
    December 11, 2007

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    OMFG!!!!!!!

    my friend is here lol
    i really like this piece that u did


  • daddys girl08
    December 11, 2007
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    i felt like this last night. i nearly shaved my damn head just to feel sane.