To give is better than receiving,
That's my thought on Christmas evening.
As family members gather near,
I wish them peace and Christmas cheer.
A contest entry
- Four Line of Christmas by Lj-.
300 points, ended December 23, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
I should invite you over for Christmas because I've always felt that it was better to receive than to give.
I don't know, Christmas is over-commercialized. If it were up to me and it isn't, I would just have a nice dinner and that would be it.


-
Good write.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
-
Succint and very sweet
May every Christams cheer alight upon your home this year!
Beautiful poem. Stay warm, and be happy!

-
Very short and sweet
Nothing like a Hallmark Moment to spread that holiday cheer - good luck in the contest






