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Stubborn

so stubborn! this
last leaf clinging
as if it matters
he asks if I remember
the day we met

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  • crazymomma
    May 24, 2008
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    Totally powerful and great metaphore. I love it!


  • haikumonk silver member
    December 23, 2007
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    Great write. Enjoyed each and every line. Congrats on a fine tanka.


  • PureRomance
    December 11, 2007

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    Wow. This was awesome. I love the background as well. Keep up the excellent work and God bless you always in all that you do and write. I hope you have an excellent Christmas.