For days on end now, I feel so
Alone
No one to share the good and bad with, just
Alone
There are times when I can enjoy being
Alone
But I’ve spent too much time on my own,
Alone
Through the tough times of late, it’s hard to be
Alone
I’m tired of trying to traverse this life
Alone
Wanting comfort when I get home, but instead I’m just
Alone
Wishing you would hold me in my sleep, but I’m so cold and
Alone
Longing for your companionship and love, but I’m left all
Alone
If you would let me, I’d gladly be yours, and yours
Alone
A contest entry
- Your not meant to feel alone with family...yet i am lost by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended December 25, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Coping with Being Alone by zappa.
900 points, ended January 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ALL ALONE!!!!!! by kales4.
375 points, ended February 15, 2008, 30 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest! i really enjoyed the repition of alone. It was a good write. Good Luck
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The repetition at first, I was uncomfortable with, but this write does grow on one. I especially liked the last stanza.
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Identifying
Your write I feel personally has this arresting powerful impact on the reader-'Alone'-the picture accompanying this poem says it effectively-' just
Alone'-twice repeated in all it's simplicity says it all-It is something I am sure all of us can identify with at some time or the other-'There are times when I can enjoy being Alone But I’ve spent too much time on my own,Alone'-this has so much of implication-the part that really reached out and tore me was-'If you would let me, I’d gladly be yours, and yours Alone'
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this is beautifully written ane repition of alone really captures the readers attention. well done and thankyou
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