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from the Genesis...

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poetry is a sagacious child which candidly reveres
angelically harmonizes and sincerely agonizes

the dust is never witnessed in the terra firma
where this baby wanders, where this innocent transits

there sky up lands down
to make this infant its own son
to hand over the inheritance

the cosmos decipher this juvenile
with the sublimity of life
which is coherent from the Genesis

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  • Everwind Rising
    December 16, 2007
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    Thought provoking piece and intriquing metaphor.

  • loving
    December 16, 2007
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    wowowow this is awesome!


  • rhondasail
    December 11, 2007

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    Life....poetry is life and life is poetry...this is how I read this piece. I again am amazed by the specificity of language used by you, Poet. Poetry upon poetry...best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda