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It Was Just

It was just
another sad ending
in a lifetime
that is everchanging
Abandoned on the day
Sands blowing away
A glittering jeweled mosaic
beneath
In a palace of gold.





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  • Puppydog gold member
    December 11, 2007
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    SO, SO SAD!!!!

    This could be me right now So many sad endings and it seems never a bright one


    • Taranand
      December 12, 2007
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      So, so sad

      Hi sweet Puppydog, I think we're patching it up. Long distance relationships are so tricky

  • suseann
    December 11, 2007
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    I don't know why King Tut comes to mind in reading this, but it did. It whispers static and true of the ending of anyone's life though.I doubt most could of said it better in verse than this.Sorry you had to suffer in lose to know this. Yet,it's all part of life.Very profound piece.

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