QueenOftheJunglegym
Option 1.
d) "Stay away from her. Its the best thing for you"
The little girl I once knew
Turned into a beautiful lady
And I gave her my heart
No doubt, no maybe
This beautiful lady
A godess rich and pure
Was my one and only
And all I wanted was her
Days turned to weeks
Weeks turned to a month
I stopped admiring from far
And asked her for lunch
We talked and laughed
She had a good time
We even shared a kiss
When we said goodbye
I waited by the phone
Waiting for her to call
For a life without my godess
Wasn't a life at all
I waited long and hard
Jumping at every call
Until I realised
She wasn't ringing at all
I tried to move on
But I felt all nervous and shy
My mates didn;t understand
They kept on asking why
The best thing that ever happened to me
Had been taken away
My pain was tortured more
When I saw her the next day
Stay away from her. It's the best thing for you
My mum said to me
And after giving love a try
I agree
* note: this was written as a guy talking...I'm a girl so i don;'t think guys have as much emotion as this does...they probably do but at least the ones i know don't. Feel free to tell me what I did wrong
Cheers
A contest entry
- Impress Me by musik-freek.
450 points, ended December 24, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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Thanks for entering
Hey, thanks for entering my contest. I enjoyed reading your poem. Much love, Katie -
Made me think
its a nice poem. but it seems a bit forced. like you had to write it. and with the quote. please dont use it as the title. Thanks for entering

