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"Stay away from her. Its the best thing for you"

QueenOftheJunglegym
Option 1.
d)  "Stay away from her. Its the best thing for you"


The little girl I once knew
Turned into a beautiful lady
And I gave her my heart
No doubt, no maybe

This beautiful lady
A godess rich and pure
Was my one and only
And all I wanted was her

Days turned to weeks
Weeks turned to a month
I stopped admiring from far
And asked her for lunch

We talked and laughed
She had a good time
We even shared a kiss
When we said goodbye

I waited by the phone
Waiting for her to call
For a life without my godess
Wasn't a life at all

I waited long and hard
Jumping at every call
Until I realised
She wasn't ringing at all

I tried to move on
But I felt all nervous and shy
My mates didn;t understand
They kept on asking why

The best thing that ever happened to me
Had been taken away
My pain was tortured more
When I saw her the next day

Stay away from her. It's the best thing for you
My mum said to me
And after giving love a try
I agree


* note: this was written as a guy talking...I'm a girl so i don;'t think guys have as much emotion as this does...they probably do but at least the ones i know don't. Feel free to tell me what I did wrong
Cheers

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  • musik-freek
    December 24, 2007
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    Thanks for entering

    Hey, thanks for entering my contest. I enjoyed reading your poem. Much love, Katie

  • musik-freek
    December 11, 2007

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    Made me think

    its a nice poem. but it seems a bit forced. like you had to write it. and with the quote. please dont use it as the title. Thanks for entering