Wild rhythm, drums pound, merry skirts promenade
Moonlight shimmers on glossy luminous hair
Still her eyes, shine brighter, burn for one man
Light-footed steps soar, fluttering wingtips
Fire-sheen glows on silken skin, captivating air
Only if she dare beckon, heavy trails her heart
Silken scarves tossed carelessly at her pounding feet
Men implore, pathetic dogs, she dances on
Alone in her world, only one man meets her gaze
Bold green eyes sparkle in the moonlight
Swaying body so warm, fluid movements beckon
Drawing close by her side, crowd goes still
His wild soul calls to hers, embraces greet thee
Find love in night’s lovely bright illusions
Voices fall on deaf ears, her eyes become the sea
Tender touch, no one dared to win her heart
Until this night, untamed flame shall spark within
Oh dream he calls to the angel, caressing, is she real
Love she pleads to this shadow, trembling
Igniting moments, search no more, they dance
Author notes
prompt: " I wanna rock your gypsy soul..." Van Morrisson
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Are you a dancer? You have an amazing sense of rhythm! Brava! It's always those green eyed ones isn't it?
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beautiful pic, it fit wonderful to ur poem!
i really like the way u wrote this.
it's very beautiful
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You are very adept at creating word pictures, and the art work you choose to accompany your poetry is very striking and well suited to the verse. You must also be an artist.
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Amazing I loved it
I love this part so much ''she dances on
Alone in her world, only one man meets her gaze''
Also ''Find love in night’s lovely bright illusions
Voices fall on deaf ears, her eyes become the sea
Tender touch, no one dared to win her heart''
Beautiful writing my dear <3
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Mother Teresa once said "Do not think that love in order to be genuine has to be extraordinary. What we need is to love without getting tired. Be faithful in small things because it is in them that your strength lies."
Prehaps the small things she was referring to could be acclimated to these words you have written.
Such an extravagantly expressive reading this is, it is truely a wonderful view of your artistic soul expressed into letters and words.
Thank you for sharing.
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