The worst has come and yet to be,
Chin up, for the best of you and me,
the time has come and how shall thee,
let my spirit be wild and free,
more time, less time, its all the same,
were all the players in this crazy wacked out game,
cry, be sad im here for you, but chin up for the sake of me and you,
were all here, were all the same,
were cazy and different and can hardly be tamed,
to fail, to lose, its yours to chose,
i chose for myself and you shall to,
but chin up for the sake of me and you
Author notes
this poem is about people who are down and cant seem to get back up.
Written October 30th, 2003
A contest entry
- October New Members- "Chin Up" Poetry Contest - Hosted by The AllPoetry Greeter Staff by CookieZeal.
300 points, ended November 3, 2003, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I thank you for your comment and right back at you
i read some of your work and it just fabulous -
it is very important for people to remember that they are not alone and are not as diffrent as they think.....
good luck in the contest.
peace be with & blessed be;
shaggy wolf -
Great poem, good flow and inspirational as well! Welcome to AP and Good Luck!!!
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Really good message and well put in this poem!
Please review critically
Although you gave the theme within this write, the full criteria was not followed. Please read the instructions again, and edit if you have time before tomorrow when the contest is over. You can do this!
In the event you DO edit, you may delete this first draft and post the edited one so that I will get the message!
Welcome to AllPoetry, and thank you for this entry!
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