I’m here waiting
Breathing blood in
Can’t help till I
See your face oh
Crying your name
From my pained lips
Dying ‘cause I
Know I love you still
‘Cause today was tomorrow
And I can’t help but sorrow
From the will in me
I sit here shaking
Gaunt and hallow
Wanting you here
Touching me oh
Just move here so I
Won’t stop breathing
You’re my air babe
Let me breathe you in
‘Cause today was tomorrow
And I can’t help but sorrow
From the will in me
I fell from the bed
My hair in my face
I bite down hard now
Dieing slowly
Frozen over
Dilated eyes now
Black tears fall from
My soft cheeks oh
‘Cause today was tomorrow
And I can’t help but sorrow
From the will in me
I see you there oh
In front of my door
Bringing your love
Into my soul
But what if this is
A dream not real
I see you always
Only in my head
‘Cause I want you to be mine
But I’m scared and don’t know why
Will you just hold my hand?
‘Cause today was tomorrow
And I can’t help but sorrow
From the will in me
Author notes
Please hold me babe
Please tell me what you think
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One could almost sing this poem in a way. Lovely !!!!!
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Thanks
I'm seriously thinking about adding music to it...just have to figure out how i want it to sound. Thanks for your comment.
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wow great writing ty for you comment on mine
don't think mine is as good as yours . -
Dieing should be dying
Wow, this is really beautiful, it flows well and I enjoyed reading it I'd love to hear it sung. Good work
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Yes..I was thinking of it being sung when I wrote it. I want to come up with music that can go with it. That'll be a while though. Thanks for the coment.
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