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Tonight

Tonight is still young,

I dedicate it to you

Our past love has sprung

Even though you're untrue.

 

You've stabbed me before,

You'll stab me again

You've driven me mad,

You'll drive me to sin.

 

You'll open my heart

And rupture it too

You'll take it apart

Take your time,

tonight.

Author notes

How I feel about my ex calling me tonight.

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  • Blooming Poet
    February 8, 2008

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    okay, if someone hurt you once you should consider that a red flag stay away hes going to hurt again sign. love hurts, don't let it hurt more then it has to

  • Nighttime angel
    January 11, 2008
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    clappys anyone?

  • Nighttime angel
    January 11, 2008

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    I like this poem, the emotions are felt strongly through out this poem. excellent job on writing this.
    good luck in the contest.

    kat